Most of us in the business world use
emails as the main, and in some cases, the only means of written communication.
For many students studying Business
English, practising their email writing skills is an important part of their
course.
While most of us are happy to write
informal emails to friends that might have grammatical mistakes in them, the
same is not true when writing to colleagues and clients with whom we want to
make a good impression or where we need to be a bit more careful or more
diplomatic than usual.
So, how can you ensure that your
email writing skills are up to standard? Here are 7 general tips I’d like to share with you:
1. Subject Line:
Always have a subject line that summarises briefly and clearly the contents of the message.
For example - Re: Summary of Our Meeting with ABC Suppliers
Always have a subject line that summarises briefly and clearly the contents of the message.
For example - Re: Summary of Our Meeting with ABC Suppliers
2. Short and Simple Sentences
Use short and easy sentences. Long
sentences can often be difficult to read and understand. The most common
mistake that I see my students making is to translate directly from their own
language.
This can often lead to confusing
sentences. I always tell my students to use theKISS Test - Keep It Short and Simple.
3. Think of who your reader is going
to be.
Is it a colleague, a client or your
boss? Should the email be informal or formal? Most business emails these days
have a neutral tone. Note the difference between Informal and Formal:
Informal - Thanks for the email of 15 February
Formal - Thank you for your email received 15 February
Formal - Thank you for your email received 15 February
Informal - Sorry, I can’t make it.
Formal - I am afraid I will not be able to attend
Formal - I am afraid I will not be able to attend
Informal -
Could you…?
Formal - I was wondering if you could….?
Formal - I was wondering if you could….?
Some emails to colleagues can be
informal if they are friends. This is the style that is closest to speech, so
there are often everyday words and conversational expressions that can be
used.
For instance, ‘Don’t forget’, ‘Catch you later’, ‘Cheers’.
For instance, ‘Don’t forget’, ‘Catch you later’, ‘Cheers’.
The reader will also accept bad
grammar in informal emails. However, if the email is going to a client or
senior colleague, bad grammar and an over-friendly style will not be acceptable.
4. Be very careful of capital
letters, punctuation, spelling and basic grammar.
While these can be tolerated in informal emails, they are very important in business emails as they are an important part of the image you create.
While these can be tolerated in informal emails, they are very important in business emails as they are an important part of the image you create.
Give yourself time to edit what
you’ve written before you push that Send button. In today’s busy world, it’s
very easy to send out many emails without checking them so make a conscious
effort to edit.
5. Think about how direct or indirect you want to be
In some cultures it is common practice to be very direct in email correspondence. However, this can cause a problem if you’re writing to someone in another country and in a language that is not yours. They might find your directness rude, even offensive.
Consider these:
Direct -
'I need this in half an hour'.
Indirect - 'Could I have this in half an hour?'
Indirect - 'Could I have this in half an hour?'
Direct -
'There will be a delay'.
Indirect - 'I’m afraid there will be a slight delay'.
Indirect - 'I’m afraid there will be a slight delay'.
Direct -
'It’s a bad idea'
Indirect - 'To be honest, I’m not sure it would be a good idea'.
Indirect - 'To be honest, I’m not sure it would be a good idea'.
By adjusting your tone, you are more
likely to get a more positive response from your reader.
6. Be positive!
Look at these words: helpful, good question, agreed, together, useful, I’d be delighted, mutual, opportunity.
Look at these words: helpful, good question, agreed, together, useful, I’d be delighted, mutual, opportunity.
Now look at these: busy, crisis, failure, forget it, I can’t, it’s impossible, waste, hard
The words you use show your attitude
to life so choose your words wisely.
7. Get Feedback
Try and get some feedback on the emails that you write in real life. This could be from your English Teacher or someone you know whose English is better than yours.
Try and get some feedback on the emails that you write in real life. This could be from your English Teacher or someone you know whose English is better than yours.
Study the English in the emails you
receive. If it is a well-written email, look carefully at some of the language
used. Start your own phrase book and build a bank of phrases from the ones you
receive and think would be useful in the future.
by
Shanthi Cumaraswamy Streat
posted on her blog and on Linkedin Pulse
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